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Larry M Edwards

Editing Services


Manuscript Evaluation & Critique
Copy Editing, Content Editing
Developmental Editing, Book Proposals
   Print Book & eBook Publishing Consultation

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Examples include:

Nonfiction

Nunc Coepi: Now I Begin
a memoir by
John "JT" Williams
A young Black man growing up on the seamy side of Chicagoland stood at a crossroads: He could run the streets and wind up behind bars, or he could get an education that led him on a path toward a better life than that endured by his mother and her forebears, the direct descendants of slaves. He chose the latter.

In Nunc Coepi, John "JT" Williams has written a powerful treatise. This is a story the world not only deserves to hear, but also needs to hear.
— Roger Kay, author
A Life Well Lived

JT Publishing
June 2025
She's So Cold: The Stephanie Crowe Murder Case - A Defense Attorney's Inside Story - Donald McInnis
She's So Cold: The Stephanie Crowe Murder Case — A Defense Attorney's Inside Story
true crime by
Donald E. McInnis
The author reveals how police coerce false confessions from innocent youths and proposes a new Miranda warning specifically worded for juveniles, as well as a Children's Bill of Rights.

No reader of true crime or juvenile rights should be without this outstanding book.
— Midwest Book Review

J&E Publications
February 2021
Murder Survivor's Handbook - Connie Saindon
Murder Survivor's Handbook: Real-Life Stories, Tips & Resources
Connie Saindon
From death notification to dealing with the criminal justice system, this book provides advice, resources, and techniques for getting through the aftermath
of a homicide.

Winner, Gold Award, 2015 IBPA Benjamin Franklin book awards
Finalist, San Diego Book Awards, 2015

Wigeon Publishing
September 2014

The Journey: Learning to Live with Violent Death - Connie Saindon
The Journey: Learning to Live with Violent Death
Connie Saindon
A workbook based on Restorative Retelling for clinicians and individuals.
The Journey leads people through a healing process after losing a family member or friend in a violent death.

Wigeon Publishing
December 2015

Accidental Immigrants - David Ward
Accidental Immigrants
a memoir by
David Ward
In 1965, three young Englishmen set off to drive the Pan American highway to the United States, where they hoped to find jobs. Instead, they found a new
immigration law.

Winner, San Diego
Book Awards, 2014


Tabard St. Press
March 2014

What the Private Saw: The Civil War Letters & Diaries of Oney Foster Sweet
Private Oney F. Sweet's previously unpublished letters and diaries offer a unique glimpse of the
American Civil War.

Enthralling, well-written . . . definitely one of the very best of the many published collections of Civil War letters and diaries.
— Gene C. Armistead, author, Horses and Mules in the Civil War

Wigeon Publishing
April 2015
Home From The Banks - Poems from Arthur William Raybold
Home From The Banks
Poems by Arthur William Raybold — wit, feeling, and lyrical insight from a keen observer of life.

Wigeon Publishing, 2013
Outlasting The Nazis And Communists
Outlasting The Nazis And Communists: My Life in Vienna & Prague
a memoir by Paul Vantoch, who lived under Nazi and Communist oppressors until he escaped to the West.

Pumish Publishing, 2013
Beyond the Spotlight: On the Road With Phyllis Diller - Robin Skone-Palmer
Beyond the Spotlight:
On the Road With
Phyllis Diller

a memoir by
Robin Skone-Palmer,
who recalls the years she served as the comedienne's personal secretary

Wigeon Publishing, 2013



Fiction
The Sphynx Murder Case - An A. J. Hawke Legal ThrillerDonald E McInnis
The Sphynx Murder Case
An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller

by Donald E. McInnis
First of the series: A young man has confessed; case closed. Or is it?
Did David Caine actually confess? Did he truly rape and kill his college sweetheart?
A.J. "Drew" Hawke believes otherwise, insisting the real culprit, dubbed The Sphynx, raped and killed the young woman. Worse yet, The Sphynx is still at large.

J&E Publications
February 2022

Return of the Sphynx - An A. J. Hawke Legal ThrillerDonald E McInnis
Return of the Sphynx
An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller

by Donald E. McInnis
Second in the series: The San Diego police have arrested a young man for the so-called Sphynx rapes. The DA believes he will finally defeat the suspect's defense attorney, A.J. Hawke. His chief evidence: The suspect's DNA matches the rapist's DNA. But is the suspect the real Sphynx rapist?

Editor's Pick: Publisher's Weekly Booklife Review:
Nail-biting legal thriller. . . . Great for fans of Scott Turow and Phillip Margolin.

J&E Publications
November 2022

Blood of the Father - An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller - Donald E McInnis
Blood of the Father
An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller

by Donald E. McInnis
Third in the series: A woman barges into the law office of San Diego attorney A.J. Hawke and confesses to killing her philandering husband, a prominent U.S. Senator.
But did she? The evidence suggests otherwise.

Midwest Book Review:
Highly recommended.

J&E Publications
April 2024


Cops Gone Bad - An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller - Donald E McInnis
Cops Gone Bad
An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller

by Donald E. McInnis
Fourth in the series: A.J. Hawke faces the police brotherhood and its Blue Code of Silence.

Publisher's Weekly
Booklife Review:
Sharply plotted thriller exploring the gray zone between justice and vengeance.


J&E Publications
October 2024


Blood in the Water - An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller - Donald E McInnis
Blood in the Water
An A. J. Hawke Legal Thriller

by Donald E. McInnis
Fifth in the series: Two children of a Mexican drug lord have been kidnapped by the FBI. Meanwhile, a "murder by shark" suggests a drug deal gone bad. In a tense courtroom battle, Hawke invokes The Great Writ, a Common Law principle of Habeas Corpus, to free the children and prove client his innocent of murder.

Editor's Pick: Publisher's Weekly Booklife Review: Delivers with brisk action and high stakes.

J&E Publications
June 2025


Codename Parsifal - Martin Roy Hill
Codename: Parsifal
The Spear of Destiny: The Roman Legionnaire’s lance that pierced Christ’s body as he hung on the cross. In the dying embers of Europe's largest conflagration, three teams seeking the lance are on a collision course that will lead them to one of the evilest places on earth — the ideological heart of the Nazi SS. Inspired by historical events.

Winner, Best Military Thriller of 2023, BestThrillers Book Awards

32-32 North
September 2023

The Fourth Rising - Martin Roy Hill
The Fourth Rising
A mystery/thriller by
Martin Roy Hill
The horrific murder of an old flame's husband sets former war correspondent Peter Brandt on the hunt for hidden Nazi treasure. Inspired by true historical events and recent research suggesting the Nazi Party survived the German surrender and has infiltrated U.S. politics.

Winner, Best Mystery, Best Indie Book Awards, 2020

32-32 North
May 2020

The Fourth Rising - Martin Roy Hill
The Butcher's Bill
a mystery/thriller by
Martin Roy Hill
In Iraq, a shipment of $9 billion in cash goes missing. Each effort to find it ends in death. In Southern California, a mercenary's murder, a severed head, and a bloody hand-written message spark a massive manhunt. Torn from today's headlines, the plot will keep readers on edge until its final, explosive climax.

Best Mystery/Suspense Novel, Best Indie Book Awards, 2017

Winner, Clue Award, Best Suspense/Thriller, 2017

Winner, Adult Fiction, California Author Project, 2018

32-32 North
June 2017

Digital Dick - John Mullen
Digital Dick
a mystery by John Mullen
After he witnesses a bloody murder, Dick, a computer with a human personality, offers to assist the San Diego Police Department in catching the killer.

Winner, San Diego Book Awards, 2015;

Murders in Time Press
July 4, 2014

Final Return - Ron Howeth
Final Return
a novel by Ron Howeth
A terminally ill Vietnam veteran assembles a team of combat vets to turn the tables on the IRS.

Temecula Valley Publishing
April 15, 2014
(out of print)

Water Shock - Milt Burgess
Water Shock
a novel by
Milt Burgess
Water expert Charlie Reagan does battle with evil people, true believers, natural disasters, and failed water policy.

Finalist, San Diego Book Awards, 2014

Agua Nuevo Publishing
2013



Publishing Consultant

  • What's best for you? Traditional path through a literary agent and New York publishing house? Co-op or subsidised publishing? Self-publishing? Print on demand? ePublishing/eBook? I can help you sort through the options to determine what's the best fit for you, in economic as well as practical terms.

  • Projects include:
She's So Cold: The Stephanie Crowe Murder Case - A Defense Attorney's Inside Story - Donald McInnis
She's So Cold: The Stephanie Crowe Murder Case — A Defense Attorney's Inside Story
true crime by Donald E. McInnis
paperback, ebook

Final Return - Ron Howeth
Final Return
a novel by Ron Howeth
paperback, ebook

Outlasting The Nazis And Communists: My Life in Vienna & Prague - Paul Vantoch
Outlasting The Nazis And Communists: My Life in Vienna & Prague
a memoir by Paul Vantoch
hardcover, paperback, ebook

Golden: An American Odyssey
Golden: An
American Odyssey

a memoir by
Michael L. Hughes
hardcover
(case binding)




Praise

I could not have gotten this done without you.
— Don McInnis

Editor Larry Edwards was exactly the right person for this project, and his insight, compassion and expertise have been indispensable.
— Connie Saindon

Thank you, Larry Edwards, for helping shepherd Digital Dick into being. You have greatly increased the level of Dick's Satisfaction Index.

— John Mullen

I couldn't have done this without you.
— Paul Vantoch

Thank you, dear Lord, for finding Larry Edwards, a man I have never met except in cyberspace but feel like he is my best friend. Larry edited this book, kept me on course, and prevented me from embarrassing myself. I recommend Larry to any one who is foolish enough to tackle something like this book.
— Michael L. Hughes

Your insights, your knowledge, your quick understanding of what I'm trying to do are impressive and amazing. As I rewrote the synopsis, I could see the novel transform in my head and it's terrific, thanks to you. You're an outstanding teacher!
— Sharon Davis

Thank you, thank you! ... Larry Edwards went through the [manuscript] line by line.
— Gary Sutton

I thank you a million times for bringing my stories to life. I hope you will always keep me under your tutelage. You are of great help to me.
— Isaac Olaleye




For a free consultation, sample edit, and cost estimate, contact Larry.



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